2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

Nowadays, while many people would draw the conclusion as soon as what they see or what they hear, the attention to the kowing the ture is on the decline. Should such a trend contiune, it would be difinitely lead to an undesirable result in the long run. In my opinion, it is unintelligent to draw the conclusion right away. Every coins has two sides. We should know the whole procedure to get the conclusion. I would do this thing when I was young because I didn't know the fact. In the past days, I walked on the way to school when I saw a man cratched the little girl. I was so affaired that the girl woule be cratched by the crimer and I called the police. I drew the conclusion so fast that to be lead to an undesirable result. The man is the father of the girl and they had to cratched the train, but because of my fault to maked them delay the train. In other to change the mind, efforts should be made! It is the wrong mind to draw the conclusion right away just because of the things you see and hear.