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词数100左右。生词:营养(nutrition)
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;从句数量稍显不足,注意增加从句和复杂句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Nowadays,fast food has flooded in our lives,especially among teenagers and workers.people always be inclined to choose fast food because they don't have any energy to make food.Otherwise,the fashion of fast food are affecting people‘s lives. Firstly,fast food is very convenient,people can stuff themselves within several minutes.In this way,they can save more time to work or other things.At this point,fast food do save a lot of time this fast—changing world.Secondly,in terms of nutrition,fast food is far from satisfactory.It usually does not compose a balanced diet and is low in nutrition value.Thus,doctors always suggest that people,especially children,eat fast food as little as possible.No one can deny the fact that fast food cause great harm to people‘s healthy.What's more,fast food have too many colories to make people fat. Now,these problems are more and more frequently discussed in people’s daily life.Some are for it but others are not.All in all,if we can take some measures like increasing the nutrition in fast food,we will find a balance between these problems.Before it ,we should eat it as little as possible,especially children.