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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量。
With the development of technology，great changes have been taken place in China。One most of them is that tourism is becoming more flowering business than before，but some environment pollution problems have been brought with a lot of tourists。 As we all know， persons who want to go out to other places for traveling must take trains，drive cars and all。It would increase the emissions form automobiles and burning of the mineral，the tail gas will pollute the environment and make the temperature of the whole global higher。On the other hand，when tourists visit the interest of places or natural scenery，some of them will carve some words on trees or other things to prove them once came here。This also do harm to environment，what's more，some tourists take foods to these beauty pots，eat up them then throw the rubbish here and there。If people do it a long period of time，as a result，the balance of natural environment will be broken up。 In a word，the tourists will bring harm to environment。If people want the world become better and better，everyone should improve personal qualities and get along well with nature。
