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2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6927
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题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇表达比较恰当,避免拼写错误;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮。

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With the popularity of TV, radio, especially the general using of intelligent mobile phone, almost every day people contact with a variety of advertisings. Advertisings have hugely effected every one. Firstly, advertising is an inducement to cause us to buy some unneccessary goods just because the goods looks so good in advertise. Especially for new products, persons tend to try if they are really such great like they are boasted in advertise. Secondly, advertising reducing the diversity of different individuals' buying behaviour. It makes people form a simple and similar favor to some spicific brand. More than that, advertising can even creat fashion to effect the life style of people. Advertising cause a lot of issues while it effects the lives of people. Large companies, being strong in finance, are easy to manulate most of person's buying behaviour via advertising. Some small companies, despite how well their products are, due to lacking money spending in advertising, are very hard to make market shares. For these small corporates, to let their products be known, have to spend a great deal of money in advertising which raise the cost. The final result is that either small corporates can't survive due to high cost or they price their products highly, which finally hurt common consumers' benefits. In a nut shell, now we are in an advertising world, we cannot shy away its effecting completely.

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