2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Now,as we know, phone has got into our life. Wherever you are, you will see some people who is playing his phone.The consequences of overusing it has a bad influence on our life. Increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life is bad for us. In the one hand, the use of phone give us more interesting life.For example,we can call our friends when we miss them,even we can talk each other face to face. First of all,we can play it while we would like to relax. In the meanwhile, we can use it to watch TV, play games,and surf the Internet. however, it can be bad for our eyes because we spend more time on it, and we even stay up because of the phone. Therefore we have few time to commuciate with our famlies and friends. Maybe we prefert play phone to do something what we should do. As far as i am concerned, we must decreat the time what to use the phone. Of course ,we should use it when we have something.