2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Now,as we know, phone has got into our life. Wherever you are, you will see some person who is playing his phone.The consequences of overusing it has a bad influence on our life. Increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life is bad for us. On the one hand, the use of phone gives us more interesting life.For example,we can call our friends when we miss them,even we can talk each other face to face. First of all,we can play it while we would like to relax. In the meanwhile, we can use it to watch TV, play games,and surf the Internet. On the another hand, it can be bad for our eyes because we spend more time on it, and we even stay up because of the phone. Therefore we have little time to commuicate with our famlies and friends. Maybe we prefert play phone to do something what we should do. As far as I am concerned, we must decreat the time what to use the phone. Of course,we should use it when we have something.