2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮；作者在高级词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了。

As is vividly and ironically depicted in the picture, three men are busing with pouring water into the barrel which was never filled on the edge. One responsible for shouldering water, the other one carrying water up the ladder, the last pouring water into the barrel. Even though they made a collaboration with each other, and do their best endeavour to finish the task, they never succeed. Why? Because the pieces of wood of the barrel were broken. Simple as the cartoon is, it does mirror a rather distributing phenomenon that all we did was unuseful word, when we dedicate the bulk of our power into task if we neglect crutical problem in our life. The picture teach us that we should take overall singht on our duty at first, and then to findout the leading cause then master the correct solution. Everyone know the goal is important, but if we havn't a correct destriction we never success. As the old idol from Mao Zedong that is "All things should be realistic". Only when we have generally understanding about the reality, and master the crucial leading cause, the uccess will come to us.