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Is it unwise to judge according to what we see or listen? As we all know we can't judge a book by it cover,judgeing a person by their apparence.there are many thing which we can't judge it base on what we see or listen. What we see or listen only replace a part of thing which it is easily wrong,because many famous person don't have prefect apparence. When Napolun is a children mang students laugt at him that they think it is too short to succeed,but history tell us manu persons ars wrong.At the same time,when listening others' talking we should think much whether it is true or false.Don't believe others too much only when we realize it is false which it is too late.Sometimes it bring large lost that we believe others only through seeing or listeniing. In all,we can't draw a conclusion only base on what we see or listen.only when we experience it can we draw a conclusion,don't believe your eyes and ears because its usually chat yourself,you should get your ideas by your thing.
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