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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第41篇:为什么学生会选择出国留学

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:00浏览次数:2796
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Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad?

Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

很多学生会选择出国上大学。这是为什么呢?给出原因并作出解释。

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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但要注意减少拼写错误;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。

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Studying in your own home countries offers various benefits for native students as the government supporting education program, local students often get less requirements including tuition fee and entrance test. However, oversea studying with its exotic cultural elements and advanced knowledges of different areas have been drawing numerous students from their motherland to go abroad. The phenomenon is quite prevalent in China as well. To start off , China as a developing country with ever-growing economic is now on the world's stage. Chinese people's living standard is increasing at a high rate leading to the possibility of oversea travelling. As the oversea travelling becoming more and more common, people start to respect and admire the other countries' culture and science. I believe that the economy attibute largely to people's decision of studying oversea. Besides the economy, studying abroad have its edge. First, those who have been expose to a foregn land tend to be more flexible and knowledgeable. For example, those who had been sent by chinese government to the developed countries like America, France, Japan when China was just united as an independent country turned out to be the leading force in every aspect of building China as a modern country. Of course, it is not just beneficial for the government, it is very crucial for individual growth as well. oversea studying always expands one's horizon and enrich one's life experience. Further more, studying in a foreign land turn out to be the most efficeint way for one to require a second language. Students are more likely to go abroad at a young age these days with interests in exploring a new world and looking forward to having a bright furture. I think people should all spend some time studying oversea at least seeking part of their higher education abroad.

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