2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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On maintaining trust Trust is significant for human to live on the earth.Maintaining trust is Chinese traditional virtue.However,nowadays a lot of people lose their trust to others,which also names"Crisis of confidence".As this phenomenon has gradually become serious,people begin to advocate human to maintain trust. The reasons of this phenomenon are below.With the development of social civilization,people excessive demand for substantial enjoyment.So as the trusty virtue.For example,some employers of firms always afraid that their employees will steel goods when they produce,so the employer set monitoring in every rooms,even in the toilet.In this way,the employees lost personal freedom and begin to resign the job.At last,the employers will lose all the employees and sums of profits.Thus,it's the employer's doubt lead to his lost. What's more,people love to make a conclusion according to what they see or hear at their first sight,instead of thinking twice and maintaining trust.Actually,what they see or hear just some particular periods.For instant,the trusty is significant to the romance.Only when the romance maintain trust with each other,can they go for a long distance. To sum up,it's important for us to maintain trust.Being trust can not only helps us earn more profits,but also propel the relationship.Therefore,we should maintain trust towards others as well as becoming a person who was worth of trusting by others.