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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者词汇基础扎实;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

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On maintaining trust Trust is significant for human to live on earth.Maintaining trust is Chinese traditional virtue.However,nowadays a lot of people lose their trust to others,which also name"Crisis of confidence".As this phenomenon has gradually become serious,people begin to advocate to maintain trust. The reasons of this phenomenon are from below.With the development of social civilization,people excessive demand for substantial enjoyment.So as to the trust virtue.For example,some employers always afraid that their employees will steal goods when they produce,so the employer set monitoring in every room,even in the toilet.In this way,the employees lose personal freedom and begin to resign the job.At last,the employers will lose all the employees and sums of profits.Thus,it's the employer's doubt lead to his loss. What's more,people love to make a conclusion according to what they see or hear at their first sight,instead of thinking twice and maintaining trust.Actually,what they see or hear just some particular periods.For instance,the trusty is significant to the romance.Only when the romances maintain trust with each other,can they go for a long distance. To sum up,it's important for us to maintain trust.Being trust with each other can not only help us earn more profits,but also propel the relationship.Therefore,we should maintain trust towards others as well as becoming a person who was worthy of trust by others.

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