2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章层次不够清晰；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Recently,the many products bring out the information while on Excessive Packaging.The reason of appeared to information that the manufacturer wished myself products attracted to customers thought on Excessive Packaging.However,they begun fading to their surprise,when they open this Packaging of outside,then,they would talk about with the shop or sound out alone. As a customer,although these manufacturers are no problems while quanlity of products, but they made a image give to client what their packaging of products should have an expensive price and good quanties.In my opinions,these manufactorers should focus to the good quantly and no expensive price,but only focus to On Excessive Pcakaging.