2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富。

Recently,the many products bring out the information while on Excessive Packaging.The reason of appeared to information that the manufacturer wished myself products attracted to customers thought on Excessive Packaging.However,they begin fading to their surprise,when they open this Packaging of outside,then,they could talk about with the shop or sound out alone. As a one of the customer,I think that these manufacturers have no problems while quanlity of products,but they give to the customer an imagination while their packaging of products should have an expensive price and good qualities. In my opinions,these manufacturers should focus to the good quality and no expensive price,but only focus to On Excessive Pcakaging,they can think about ideas yet such as more shapes or better bit or give a small present after sold goods.