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it is very common to say that we always think what we see what we lisen and then concluded the results,it is quite unsmart. as old words said: three pople can be a tiger ,it is to say one sentence said by three pople the meaning of it may already changed.when the news is passing by humen's mouse many persional opinion be added to the news ,so the rigional face of the
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