文章词汇表达不够丰富,且请仔细检查词汇的拼写;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练。
I know you will go to Lanzhou to teach Chinese.I like Chinese because it is very easy . You can speak Chinese as much as possable and read Chinese words . You can speak Chinese in your class. I think it is good for you Chinese . I hope you like teach Chinese.