2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing succeed without a strong will It is very important fou everybody ,a strong will,is the essental of success.In other word ,nothing succeeds without a strong will. As we all known that the life is not full of wonderfull,sometimes ,we cannont advid pain .so ,for us ,we need have a strong will to deal with problems and even if to build enough self-belife .in our life ,we can see that many people insited to do what they want to do ,whatmore ,they succeed.in my opinion ,theirs succeess,not only because they have ability enough ,but also a strong will help them go to further place.only a strong will of people can finish the great rask. As a student,i think that we also should have a strong will to study hardly.at the same time ,i belive we must be a useful people one day in the future if we can so.