单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I know you will go to Lanzhou to teach Chinese.I like Chinese because it is very easy. You can speak Chinese as much as possible and read Chinese words . You can speak Chinese in your class. I think it is good for you Chinese. I hope you will like it.