单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I know you will go to Lanzhou to teach Chinese.I like Chinese because it is very easy. You can speak Chinese as much as possible and read Chinese words. You can speak Chinese in your class. I think it is good for you Chinese. I hope you will like it.