作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中衔接词丰富。
It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. From my point of view, students should never do things like that. Firstly, it will do no good to develop their independence.