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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5303
要求:
题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

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It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has led to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. From my point of view, students should never do things like that. Firstly, it will do no good to develop their independence. As we all know, it is of great significance for college students to be independent, which will prepare them for their lives in the future.

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