2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦112:Traveling in Our Life

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

How can we go out for traveling? Nowadays more and more university students choose the self-help traveling. When you get out to a place you want to travel, you have to depend on yourself. That means you can have more time to enjoy the traveling time. Without another person jam you. So you can enjoy your free time and indulge in the beautiful view. Nonetheless self-help traveling has some problems, which can bother us in our traveling time. First, you have to find a hotel for yourself. However some hotels are illegal. Your traveling would be very dangerous. Second, you have to pay more money in transportation and entrance ticket. Third, if you are in danger, you have to ask help for yourself, no one can help you. In my opinion, if you want to travel some place, you can call some friends together. With a friend following you in your traveling time, you can enjoy your traveling time and secure your safety.