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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40884
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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As is depicted in the picture,the counter replaied the student that ‘how to do well in school without studing'is over there in the fiction section.The cartoon illustrated that it is impossible to do well in school without studying. As far as i amm concerned,we all should pay more attention to how to learning rather than finding a way without studing.First of all,it is our duty to studying in school. We should focus on our aim and ovwecome any barriers on the way.On the other hand,there is a famous saying that no pains ,on gains.I firmly believe it.We can not to do well if we studying nothinng in school.Finally, the most important thing is we must learned any skills so that we can have a good reputation in thw world. All in all,If you want something and you must fight for it.

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