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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40884
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用。

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As is depicted in the picture,the counter replayed the student that ‘how to do well in school without studying is over there in the fiction section.The cartoon illustrated that it is impossible to do well in school without studying. As far as i am concerned,we all should pay more attention to how to learning rather than finding a way without studying.First of all,it is our duty to studying in school. We should focus on our aim and overcome any barriers on the way.On the other hand,there is a famous saying that no pains ,on gains.I firmly believe it.We can not to do well if we studying nothing in school.Finally, the most important thing is we must grasped any skills so that we can have a good reputation in the world. All in all,If you want something and you must fight for it.

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