文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。
As is depicted in the picture,the counter replayed the student that ‘how to do well in school without studying is over there in the fiction section.The cartoon illustrated it is impossible to do well in school without studying. As far asI am concerned,we all should pay more attention to how to learning rather than finding a way without studying.First of all,it is our duty to studying in school. We should focus on our aim and overcome any barriers on the way.On the other hand,there is a famous saying that no pains ,on gains.I firmly believe it.We can not to do well if we studying nothing in school.Finally, the most important thing is we must grasp any skills so that we can have a good reputation in the world. All in all,if you want something and you must fight for it.
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