2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I know my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown.For this,I suggest he to go to the capital of China, Beijing,which is an ancient city in China.As we all Chinese known,Beijing is great of culture as a old city and the cultures are very colorful.In addition,There are a lot of full of historical buildings where when you standing there,you would seem like at chinese traditional landscape paintings.Besides,with the development of China's economy,Beijing has become a large and international city,which has been held lot of world events.Such as the 2008 Olympic game,the Paralympic Game,the WPE and so on.In a word,Beijing ,a word full of vigor and vitality,a window through which you can get a big picture of China,is definitely a place worth visiting.