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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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用户练习作文:

The picture above is a vivid description of the phenomenon that communication between teenagers and their parents is for the most part through the Internet.With the development of internet,more and more persons prefer use the electronic communication rather than face-to-face contact.In my opinion,everything has two sides,electronic communication take convenience for person who far away from each other,but if using it by a wrong way,it would reduces the frequency of people to communicate face-to-face.Nowadays,children have many ways of socializing and communicating online,but they come with certain risks.As far as I am concerned,in an electronic society,electronic communication as a major part of our life,we should use it by a correct way.Because,only communicate face-to-face with people,can we get a sincere communication.

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