2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

As the bar chart given above, we can easily observe the difference between the life expectancy and infant mortality from 1960 to 1990. Obviously, the life expectancy of people is shown to be in a increasing tendency in the period of 1960 to 1990,which means people prefer longer life nowadays. On the contrast, when it comes to infant mortality, it drop to the half of 1960's statistic. From my perspective, this phenomonon might be drawn from two points. First of all, with the comprehensive condition getting better and better, our index of happiness is rising, which lead us to wish a longer life. Moreover, the decreasing of infant mortality rate is probably result of the significant development of our state's medical level. Nevertheless, this phenomonon might aggravate the problem of rising unemployment.