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Dear jane I received the letter you sent me.I am very happy to hear that you will come to my hometowm nest week . My hometown is a beautiful mountain village in southern china that i grow up call ZhaoAn.There are many wonderful places in there.such as JiuHouYang JiangJunmountains Maliwang and so on.But the most famous place is jiuhouyang.there are special trees in Jiuhongyang.when you work on there.You can see many intersting things.like lover'turtle.and there also have a temple It is not a common temple.Because something mysterious things in the temple.What? You got to fine by yourself. HaHa.I do not tell you any more .Are you curious? I am looking forward to you arrival nest week yours LiLi
