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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33595
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

用户练习作文:

of course, we are supposed to be careful with our money presenting our effort and harvesty, but it not always good to too emphasize that.that is to say, it is your capability of making a fortune but not saving your money makes you smart.therefore, there is no use to reduce your proper expenses comparised with creating wealth. Take Bilgate as an example, a famous person who is perfer working a minute to picking up a hundred dollars he left, because working a minute means twice value even more in constrast of picking up it.

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