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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
of course, we are supposed to be careful with our money presenting our effort and harvesty, but it not always good to too emphasize that.that is to say, it is your capability of making a fortune but not saving your money makes you smart.therefore, there is no use to reduce your proper expenses comparised with creating wealth. Take Bilgate as an example, a famous person who is perfer working a minute to picking up a hundred dollars he left, because working a minute means twice value even more in constrast of picking up it.