2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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my dear friend: wellcome to visit my hometown , china has 5000-years-old splendid civilization and beautiful journey, as you trevel,you can see many diffirent costoms,i will take you visit great wall gugong and so on,we can to take part in sturding chinese fever, some people will cook delisiours food with who my family