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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8977
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错。

用户练习作文:

In modern society,more and more people pay attention to their appearance. Some people think that the way it looks is very important,for example,when you have interview for a job,the HR will look at your appearance first,because they can not see about your personality,that's why good looking is very important at first;some people are have a different opinion,they think it is more important to see a person'S inner,if you only look good at outside but not a nice person, that is why we can not only look appearance. my view on this is that people should pay attation to both way,we are not only looking good at our appearance but also inherent,be nice and kind.

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