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2001年考研英语作文真题:希望工程

发布时间:2013-05-20 18:40浏览次数:2165
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  Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to
  1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,
  2) give a specific example, and
  3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. 
  You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
 本文中的图画非常简单,结合提示考生很容易理解其含义,但这张图片的意义却很深远:油灯上面的火焰是一个孩子的微笑,在黑暗中发出明亮的光芒,上面还有一句提示语“爱心是一盏灯,在越黑暗的地方越明亮。”这句话的理解关系到对整篇文章中心思想的正确理解。这句话的前半句是个比喻,后半句是一个越……越……的结构,考生应该深刻领会爱心的重要作用。本文中的提纲有三点,一是写出对于图画象征意义的理解,二是举出一个具体的事例,三是就献爱心的最好办法给出建议。另外这道题目中增加了情景语言,即:包括情景说明,提纲说明,以及图画。降低了题目的难度,考生可以结合提纲式作文、规定情景作文和图画作文的写作特点完成本文的写作。但要注意一个重要原则:英语情景说明语句,不可直接照搬,需要进行改动。尽量应用同义,近义词,相关表达,不同句式改造。例如worthy 可以替换为valuable,feelings 可以替换为 emotions,mankind 可以替换为 human being,noblest可以替换为greatest等。我们可分三段来完成本文。在第一段中不仅应描述图画,还应描述上面的那句话。在第二段中,应举一个能与图画所表达的道理相匹配的典型事例。这样的事例很多,考生可以结合自己的经历列举,如希望工程、抗洪捐款等等,也可以列举具体人物。最后一段中,考生可以提出自己的建议,这一部分难度不高,考生可以套用一些模版句型。
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As is vividly described in the cartoon, there are two completely deffirent coupls, one of which dressed handsamely while the other couples wear tags. But they have the some sympathy towards each other. Why? It is natural that the elegant couples think the couples who wear mend bargain is poor. But to the other couples, they think the love amongs lovers is the more important than the rich in material posessions in life. In their view, the elegant couples have a unprefect love, they are not really happy in their deep heart. We can enduce that the painter intents to tell us that which rich is really rich. And the answer is obvious. There is sperad-widely phenomenon that people pursue the material prosession while they usually neglect the spiritual wealth. The wellbeing not always odds with the number of money. As a reporting that a old man who donat all his saving to "the Hope Program" even if he make his life with collecting garbage. He always wear the bargain witch patch up everywhere. But it is undoubted that the old man is the richest man in our heart. The rich is not only about the material wealth, elegant garment, big house, the big wealth is the love between lovers, parents, friends, neibrights, and even a strange person who is suffering from natural disaster. The news about singers and TV-stars who could get a number sum of menoy only through working a few of hours, who was reported that carry up serious depression. But the old man who always smile when he collect garbage. In my view, to be rich is to have a warm heart, as well as the ability to help others. For the persons who keep their money all day, and refuse to help others, the results could only be that they are too poor to possess anything, except money.

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