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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11340
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

As the time go by, more and more people start to use the mobile phone in their life. As you see this picture, people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. why do people become addicted to it. I think the main reason is that the mobile phone can replace people's life, and people feel relaxed. therefore, people prefer to look at their cell phones than do other thing when they are feel boring. But this phenomenon is not good for the development of our society. People can become more lazy and boring. At the same time, people's eyes will become more bad. So we should use it when we need to use it. We can't make it occupy whole life's time.

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