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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；适当增加高级词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多。
As is vividly described in the cartoon, there are two completely different couples, one of which dressed magnificently while the other couples wear tags. But they have sympathy towards each other. Why? It is natural that the elegant couples think the couples who wear mend bargain is poor. But to the other couples, they think the love among lovers is the more important than the rich in material possession in life. In their view, the elegant couples have a ragged love, so they are not really happy in their deep heart. We can enduce that the painter intents to tell us that which rich is really rich. And the answer is obvious. There is sperad-widely phenomenon that people pursue the material prosession while they usually neglect the spiritual wealth. The wellbeing not always odds with the number of money. As a reporting that a old man who donat all his saving to "the Hope Program" even if he make his life with collecting garbage. He always wear the bargain witch patch up everywhere. But it is undoubted that the old man is the richest man in our heart. The rich is not only about the material wealth, elegant garment, big house, the big wealth is the love between lovers, parents, friends, neibrights, and even a strange person who is suffering from natural disaster. The news about singers and TV-stars who could get a number sum of menoy only through working a few of hours, who was reported that carry up serious depression. But the old man who always smile when he collect garbage. In my view, to be rich is to have a warm heart, as well as the ability to help others. For the persons who keep their money all day, and refuse to help others, the results could only be that they are too poor to possess anything, except money.
