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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
I am a citizen man named Li Ming. I was born in June 15th in 1986.I am not married .It is lucky for me to graduate from English System in Peking University in July of 2008. During school time, I performed successfully in all subjects. Besides that , I think what is most important is that I have strong ability to listen ,speak ,read and write in English. German is my second foreign language, so I am able to use basic skills to talk about each other in German. Moreover, I am familiar with process of foreign trade. Last but not the least, my hobbies cannot be ignored , such as playing basketball, singing songs and watching movies. I would appreciate it if you gave me a chance to be involved in the job called foreign trade clerk
