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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
As is vividly described in the cartoon, there are two completely different couples, one of which dressed magnificently while the other couples wear tags. But they have sympathy towards each other. Why? It is natural that the elegant couples think the couples who wear mend bargain is poor. But to the other couples, they think the love among lovers is the more important than the rich in material possession in life. In their view, the elegant couples have a ragged love, so they are not really happy in their deep heart. There is sperad-widely phenomenon that people pursue the material gain while they usually don't indifference in spiritual wealth. The wellbeing not always odd with the number of money. As a reporting that an old man who donates all his saving to "the Hope Program" even if he makes his life with collecting garbage. He always wears the rags which patch up everywhere. But it is undoubted that the old man is the richest man in our hearts. The rich are not only about material wealth, elegant garment, big house, the big wealth is the love between lovers, parents, friends, neighbours, and even a strange person who is suffering from natural disaster. The news about singers and TV-stars who could get a number sum of money only through working a few of hours, who were reported that carry up serious depression. But the old man who always smiles when he collects garbage. In my view, to be rich is to have a warm heart, as well as the ability to help others. For the persons who keep their money all day, and refuse to help others, the results could only be that they are too poor to possess anything, except money.
