作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
Dear Mr.Green, I am writing the letter for the purpose of extending my sincere gratitude to your for your kindness. When I was being interviewed yesterday,I felt so nervous as to be at a loss for words.But your timely encouragement calmed me down and filled me with enough confidence.Then I was acclaimed by all interviewers for my wonderful answers and things ended up smoothly.But that for your help,I might have been eliminated in the first round. Again,please accept my heartfelt gratitude.I am eagerly expecting our next meeting. Yours truly, Zhang Wei