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十一期间(National Holiday)，你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待，并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学，主要包括如下内容：
1．感谢同学的热情邀请；
2．对他及家人的热情款待表示感激；
3．表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象；
4．再次感谢他们一家人，并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式，而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出，内容并不复杂，可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Dear Xiaotong， I am writing this letter to express my sincere appreciate to you for you had invited me to you home on this National Holiday.And It is my honor to be entertained by your family. Your hometown is the most beautiful place that I have ever seen.Thank you for you to show me many beautiful resorts in your hometown.I can not forget the lake in your hometown.How cleaner is the water in it. It a worth trip for me.I deeply appreciated your and your families’ hospital and I hope to have the opportunity to invite you to my home. Your Sincerely, Li Ming
