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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用。
As the saying does:"the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."From my perspective,we are supposed to spend our time reasonable in order to make our life more meaningful. There are many reasons accounting for my standpoints.On the one hand,doing something meaningful can enrich our life so that when we are old we have colorful memories to recall in case regretting in the future with nothing at all.On the other hand,By making meaningful things,we can lay a foundation for our future success with confidence.which might be hard to achieve at present. However,actions speak louder than words.we need to take measures to make our life meaningful,such as reading more books instead of playing games when I am free,thinking carefully before doing a thing to make sure that it's not a waste of time for me.Most importantly,build up a plan in my dairy life and keep trying different things to find out what is more meaningful.
