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文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；适当增加高级词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
In my view, reading is very important to make my life more meaningful. First, we can know a lot of knowladge by reading, such as comunication ways with people, the source of our culture, foreign culture and so on.For example,if we do not read at all, how can we image the people's life and what happened in ancient? And why our country will be the station of today, not like USA? Second, reading helps us to broaden our horizon which makes us thought things in many different thinkings. Meanwhile, abundant horizons are good for creating many new ideas. If no reading, maybe there will not have advance ships and planes. Thirdly, we can know some famouse person's whole life by reading their owner books. Also, we can learn some valuable love emotions from reading book which is not exsit in real life. I like the pure emotion without any pollution described by writers. In a word, reading is a way to release your presses from work an life. Reading is a very good habit. Please assist reading everyday so that we can become more and more smart.
