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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

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200字以内

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作者能较好的使用一些高级词汇,同时要避免个别拼写错误;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly and ironically indicated in the cartoon, that love is an investment which need money. There is a heart in the centre of the picture, and on the heart is a mouth of eating nickles. The cartoon reflect a general phenonmenen that the youngs take too many material factors into accounts when they fall in love with someone. People would critis the girl is too material and they have a distorted view of love in our social. But to the picture, I have an another onpnion about the picture. It has equal importance between love and money. Due to the great challenge for success. Some of people would like chosen an easier way when they confront with difficulty. What more, it is more difficult to have a success for women than men. Because social have more requirement to girl. As a married woman, she have to play two or three roles. As a wife she should do all houseword subjecting to chinese tradition. And the husband usually do anything about home expect earning money. But to a poverty family. The wife need to go out for payment. Even the wife going out, the husband generally do not do anything about housework. If they have a child. The women will have things to do and lose the all about herself. It is very difficult to do well in the three or two jobs. But it would become different for woman, who have a rich husband. She can chosen one of the works, and left the last wort to other. If she want to realize her ambitions, she could employ a person to take care of her child and do the all of housework. And if she would like stay at home. It is nothing,she just stay at home. As we all know, there are so much criticsim about girl who become material. But in my view, it is natural for people to chose a happy way in the feature. But what is the really happy, the answer is diversity to different person. As a social person, we need love as well as money. If a man who fall in love with a girl but don't want to spend a little of money. It is hardly to trust that the man would become a good husband. But if a girl just pursue money regardless of love.I would think the giel would regret someday. She don't know that the most important thing for life is filled by love. And the money would go away, and the love is always in our heart.

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