2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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This is photograph showed us a conclusion ：if you have a higher degree ,you will get a higher salary.it's important to the high degree ,with the society development ,every position needs more knowledge and more skills ,if a person suffer from a low degree,he will has to face the hard life .from the photograph ,we can see it more than 14 percent of unemployment rate in 2011 result from less than high school diploma,the lowest unemployment rate in 2011 is doctoral degree.it's easy to find out more higher degree more higher salary and you needn't to worry about your position face hard hazard . In my opinion ,if you have a higher degree ,you will have a brightest future