2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；从句使用量稍显不足；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Dear Tom, I am writing this letter for the purpose of extending my genuine gratitude for your fantastic present. The figurine is exactly what I want that you presented to me as the New Year gift.But I had hunted for it for several days in the supermarkets and did not obtain the ideal one.They were either too expensive or the style was not the right one I prefer.It is so kind of you for giving me the favorite and my life will be colored by your delicate concern. Please accept my heartfelt appreciation again.I am so pround of having such a generous friend as you our friendship will be refreshed deeply. Yours truly Zhang Wei