2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend will visit my hometown . I will take him to hhe place named xianNv .The resons why I take him to this place is as follows. Firstly,this is my favorite place of my hometown.And I want to share my happiness with my friend .Secondly,in winter we can ski in the XianNv,and this is the exciting activity, of course from it we can have fun .In additon,we can enioy the scenery ,and see some animals on the mountain.Last but not least,through this trip, not only can we improve our friendship but also impove our communication skills. That's all