2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

If my foreign friend will visit my hometown ,I will take him to hhe place named XianNv mountain .The reasons why I take him to this place are as follows. Firstly,this is my favorite place of my hometown.And I want to share my happiness with my friend.Secondly,in winter we can ski in the XianNv,and this is the exciting activity, of course from it we can have fun.In additon,we can enioy the scenery ,and see some animals on the mountain.Last but not least,through this trip, not only can we improve our friendship but also impove our communication skills. That's all.