2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

Computer is one of the best inventions that men has made.In our daily life,I can assertively say that we can hardly live a comfortable life without computer.It can help us in many fields such as calculating, scientific research and business. However,we must realize it that computer is a double-edged sword.Some children abandoned themself in surfing the Internet.Fulse online advertisement does harm to our work.Online crimes make lots of users terrified.The negtive impact should never be neglected. In a nutshell,we should be more rational.It is necessary for us to make full use of it.We should use it to facilitate our life and provent it from hurting the potential victims.