2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend will visit my hometown ,I will take him to him place named XianNv mountain.The reasons why I take him to this place are as follows. Firstly,this is my favorite place of my hometown and I want to share my happiness with my friend.Secondly,in winter we can ski in the XianNv monutain,and this is the exciting activity, of course from it we can have fun.In addition,we can enioy the scenery ,and see some animals on the mountain.Last but not least,through this trip, not only can we improve our friendship but also improve our communication skills. That's all.