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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。
If my foreign friend will visit my hometown,I will take him to him place named XianNv mountain.The reasons why I take him to this place are as follows. Firstly,this is favorite place of my hometown which I want to go.And also I want to share my hobbies with my friends. Secondly,in winter we can ski in the XianNv mountain,and this is the exciting activity, of course from it we can have fun.In addition,we can enjoy the scenery,and see some animals on the mountain.Last but not least,through this trip, not only can we improve our friendship but also improve our communication skills. That's all.
