2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful city in china In most citys in china ,we can see a lot of beautiful citys in china ! and so ,I want to go to a lot of tourist places ,facing to moreand more vilages and towns ,going along streets ,in some wheres. If your foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the interstingplace you would like to take him or her to see and why ? I will show my friends to beijing ，there are many things to visit!