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it is unwise for college students to hire cleaners Recently ,whether should the college students hire a cleaner has aroused a hotted discussion among society .Some people in favor of it as it will save time for themself to do more important thing .However , others think it is not appropriate for students pay money to the cleaner .As far as l am concerned ,l give more weight on the later opioin . As a famous saying goes: How do you clean the world wothout cleaning your house ?.First of all ,Since we admitted into the university , most of us are spent on money from our parents, which i s a good reason for us say no to hire cleaners.What's more ,college life is a period of cooperation and communication with others, especially get along well with our roomates ,working and cleaning together is an excellent way to cultivate the good relationship . Last but not least ,as a college student ,lazy is the last character should we keep for we have our responsibility to protect our house ,even our country . In conclusion ,it is not wise to hire the cleaner for a college student . Let's deal with our little thing by ourself and be a better man .
